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Time skip me is here 2 years later. If you like this old piece of shit so much, go read the redux. its less shitty. 

wow 2 years ago me sucked at writing lolololol

England X Reader: Smile Please? [REDUX] take it.




"Lunch break! Who wants McDonalds?" Alfred hollers through the conference room.

"Ooo! Me! Sounds awesome!"  You reply back to your friend.

You and Alfred have been friends for who knows how long. You can't even remember how the hell you two became friends, it was just too insane to bother remembering you both say to each other every time the subject is brought up.

"How about let's not and say we did? You've eaten hamburgers for the last week! Try something different stupid" Arthur says, slightly annoyed.

And that's your other friend Arthur. He has an attitude and huge assed eyebrows. You have always kinda liked him and his big emerald eyes....Okay, let's face it, you LOVED him. He was really cute and his accent was awesome. Awesomer than Prussia. You seriously loved everything about him! But as usual, he didn't care for hamburgers.

Alfred has a look of shock on his face. "Dude! Calm down! There's nothing wrong with having burgers every day! Nothing wrong!" Leans over and whispers in your ear "Someone's uptight! What do you say?"

You whisper back "Don't be mean! He just isn't a hamburger fan."

"You're only saying that cause you like him!" Alfred snickers in your ear.

"..! S-shut up! Retard!" You start to blush at his remark.

"Well I'm not going to that rat infested fast food joint." Arthur says sharply.

"Wait!" you say. "Are you sure? We're all going, don't you wanna come?"

"Yes I'm sure. Goodbye." He says as he walks out the door.

"Woah." You are almost shocked at how abrupt he was. "I've never seen him like this."

"To be honest, he's been like this all week. He seems kinda down and upset. At least that's how it looks" Alfred replies. "I think he needs some cheering up."

"Tell me about it. I almost want to go after him."
"You should! After all-" Alfred got cut off by you covering his mouth.

"Not in the conference room Al" You say between clenched teeth. "And for the record, I'm going after him." You say with a smirk and you take you hand off his mouth.

"You go girl!" Alfred says with a fist pump.

"Oh shut up stupid!" You yell back at him as you run through the doors after Arthur.

You run through various halls and through a couple doors before you finally spot him just walking past a room with couches. You stand around the corner deciding whether you should actually go talk to him. Well, he is your crush and you wouldn't want to look stupid, but you pull yourself together and run out.

"Hey! Iggy!"  You call after him using his popular nick name.

"Hmm?" He stops and turns around to see you panting as you run and stop in front of him.

"God, there was no need to run. We are indoors."

"I...I wanted to catch up before you left" You say between deep breaths.

"You look like you're collapse! Come sit before you do." He says as he leads you towards a nearby couch and sits down. "So why did you run all the way out here?"

"Well..." You pause to collect your thoughts "I wanted to ask why you are so down. Like, you haven't smiled in a while."

Arthur sighs "I haven't had a reason to smile. I can't just do it randomly."

"Why you so sad though?!"

"I'm not sad. I just don't want to smile."

"Lame!" you say to yourself under your breath.

The two of you sit there in silence on the couch until you get an idea that you think can make the british man smile.

"You know, if you're not gonna smile, I bet I can make you!"

"What?"

Arthur has barely any time to register what you're doing before he is tackled off the couch and onto the floor with you tickling him.

"W-what the?! Get off m-me!" He says trying not to laugh.

"No! I want you to smile first!" You say, smiling yourself.

You immediately move your hands from his sides to his ribs, causing him to finally give a small smile along with a fit of giggles. But him being strong, he manages to push you off and the small smile disappears and is replaced with a sort of scowl as he sits a few feet away from you on the floor.

"Aw, no fair. I only wanted a smile!" you say pouting.

That's when you got a smile from him. Not a forced or fake one, a real smile as Arthur looks at you with a playful glint in his eyes "And I only want to get you back!" He exclaims.

Before you know it, Arthur has jumped on you and stared tickling your sides, causing you to burst out laughing. You try your hardest to push him off but he is much stronger than you so you fail miserably.

"I-Iggy! G-get off!" You manage to say through giggles.

"No~!" He chimes.

Eventually he moves his hands to your underarms and makes you jerk and twist but he's on top of you so you're basically screwed.

"Stohohohohop! S-seriously! Hahaha!"

Arthur ignores your pleas and moves his hands under your shirt and lightly drags his fingertips across your stomach.

"K-kyahahahaha! A-Arthur!"

He keeps tickling you for another 5 minutes and then he stops, getting off you and letting you breathe.

"Arthur, I..." still panting heavily.

"Thanks for getting me to smile." He interrupts, still smiling.

You sigh "You're… welcome." You finally catch your breath and decide to ask him something you've always wanted to.

"Ummm, Iggy? I have something I need to say. I ummm... I li-"

You were cut off by Arthur smashing his lips into yours and kissing you. At first you were in complete shock, but you relaxed and kissed him back. He broke the kiss after a few second and looked you in the eye.

"I like you to. No, love you." He says with a smile. "And what would you say if I asked you on a date tonight?"

"..." You felt great because of what he said. You were lost for words for a second, but quickly answered back. "I would say yes!" You reply before getting a text from Alfred.

"Who texted?" He asks.

"Alfred. He wants to know if I'm still going to McDonalds." You look up at Arthur before texting back.

"What did you say?"

"I told him he's gonna have to wait for another time cause my schedule is full this week!" You say smiling.

Arthur laughs before you throw your phone onto the couch and pull him into another kiss, wrapping your arms around his neck while he wraps his arms around your waist.

You felt so good to have finally let your feelings out towards him. And even better that he felt the same for you. You had the man you had been crushing on for months and you never felt better.
My first fanfic! don't judge! a friend threatened me to do this so i kinda had to.
didn't quite want to write a tickle fic but.... lets just say duct tape was involved so i had to write it. and i srsly just got on deviant art so i have no idea if i did anything right.
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BrokenCupcakes Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
awww~~~!
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ueitheglaceon Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD this is how my parents hooked up. And my mum is British.🇬🇧
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asianturnip Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome story!!! But I'm not actually ticklish, though I do have this reflex to kick by bending my knee when I'm tickled. My cousins found that out the hard way XD
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome story!!!~
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italyisadolphin Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm getting kind of annoyed with how when I read reader inserts with fluff/lemon the writer always says "smashed his lips onto yours" or "crashed his lips onto yours." It makes it sound kind of violent...and a bit painful too. Personally, I think "pressed" would be a better word to use. Not trying to be mean or anything....please don't take it like that ...  
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CypherOptics Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this WAS my first fan fic over a year ago. and i can completely agree with you. i've totally moved on from that "smashing" phase to a lot more detail in my better works and less... "smashing" XD

. . .OMG "SMASHING"

GET IT? CAUSE HES BRITISH? //SHOT
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IGame101 Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconsmashingplz:
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invadersharie Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student General Artist
Pff.
That was a cute pun.
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Rebeccaesque Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Humorous! 
Humerus! 
hehehehhehh 
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Bubblini Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
He... shouldn't have tickled me.. I've almost broke someones rib once from them tickling me...
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asianturnip Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol. I 'accidentally' kicked my cousin in the crotch when he tickled me...
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Bubblini Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Student Digital Artist
X3
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Kitty-Grin Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, you are amazing! I read these all night!
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JunebugJupiter Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconhandspazzplz::iconitssofluffyplz:
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Elisavetaawesome12 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Student General Artist
I laugh when people cry on the TV
:iconsulkplz: I am such a horrible person.
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
THANK YOU!!!
At least someone else does the same thing as me...
I also(either in my head or out loud) chant "Peeps gonna die!" Whenever something is related to death...
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Elisavetaawesome12 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Student General Artist
when I saw Big Hero 6 I was laughing when BayMax died..........
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Who?
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Elisavetaawesome12 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  Student General Artist
in the movie one of the main characters you were supposed to fall in love with dies right in front of you.
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Stare 
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Elisavetaawesome12 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Student General Artist
its so bad and I laughed!!!
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
XDD
I couldn't help but laugh at that face, too!!!~
XD
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Moko-Sun Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013   Writer
no Your not only one :sulk: 
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Haiena-Sensei Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Here's another one xD
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Moko-Sun Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014   Writer
:D
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Haiena-Sensei Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Booyah xD
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Moko-Sun Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014   Writer
Yuki Sohma Rat (Pretty Eyes) [V1] Bunny Emoji-30 (I'm cute) [V2] 
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Haiena-Sensei Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
:iconiggybrowsplz::iconsaysplz: Those are some nice friends you have there
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Moko-Sun Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014   Writer
T-Thanks!
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VOCALOIDHakuYowane Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student Writer
I do that too xD Hay friend :D
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Moko-Sun Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013   Writer
allo!
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VOCALOIDHakuYowane Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Student Writer
I gotz a super depressing Haku Yowane avatar pic x3
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Moko-Sun Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013   Writer
NICEEEEE
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VOCALOIDHakuYowane Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Student Writer
I KNOW RIGHT?! It reminds me of Haku ga UNINSTALL every time I see it. X3 (Haku ga UNINSTALL is a very depressing song by Haku herself. Ish very vewy sad.) (Original by Kaito, titled Kaito ga UNINSTALL.)
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Moko-Sun Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013   Writer
I Know ):
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Elisavetaawesome12 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student General Artist
im sorry but the tears and everything make me laugh!!!
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Moko-Sun Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013   Writer
I Dont Judge!
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Elisavetaawesome12 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student General Artist
i don't either!
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Moko-Sun Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013   Writer
(: Friends?LOLJamz 
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Elisavetaawesome12 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student General Artist
yay friends!
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Moko-Sun Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013   Writer
YAY!!!

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Theatrefreak123 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013
There's only one problem...I laugh when I'm in pain and scream bloody murder when I'm tickled....So to register that I was laughing would mean that Iggy was kicking the shit outta me...Very romantic Arthur...(I've been like that for years, don't ask how or why cuz I don't know)
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ueitheglaceon Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My dad stopped tickling me when I was little after I screamed loud enough for the neighbours to freak out and call 911.
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CypherOptics Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL i laugh off pain a lot. NO ONE has ever seen me cry. i dont scream bloody murder tho. i just threaten them but end up not doing anything after because im to tired to chase after their fleeing asses. XD
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Theatrefreak123 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
Yeah I play threaten when people bug me but I'll only actually for real threaten if I feel that my friends are gonna get hurt, whether it be physically or emotionally.
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ruethegoldfish Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I was trying not to smile while reading this cuz I didn't want my mom to think I was texting a boy on her phone. Lol!
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SneakyAlexaBlue24 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
omg so true

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Kyogre20 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Good God! You mien friend are an awesome writer! Even awesomer than Prussia! You now have a new watcher!
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CypherOptics Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YES!!!! :iconbrohugplz:
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